Tuesday, 7 September 2021

Ironman Description

 My character has a red bulletproof suit as red as a strawberry and his mask is as gold as a gold brick. When Ironman flies he makes a ‘shhh’ sound as he shots through the air.

Ironman 

 likes flying and he really dislikes bad guys!

Iron Man behaves crazy because he flies fast around buildings. I like Ironman because he fights bad guys and is super cool
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  1. Angela Hamilton7 September 2021 at 10:08

    Hi Lucas,
    Great job on publishing today's writing task, I really like how you described the noise Ironman makes when he flies. I'd like to know more about why he likes to fly and dislikes bad guys.
    Mrs Hamilton

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  2. Miss Hart7 September 2021 at 11:28

    Wow Lucas, what a great description of Ironman, I think you have some great ideas around his likes and dislikes. My favourite line is "when Iron Man flies he makes 'shh' sound as he shoots through the air", I like this because you have thought about what it sounds like as well as what he looks like. Why did you choose to describe Ironman?

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