in writing we are learning about narratives here is my storey
In the morning i rod my ATV down new Brighton beach and then i saw a message in a bottle and i stop my ATV and i pick it up the bottle and it said help my i am stuck on a island and i am saran by sharks pleas help me and so i had to find a way to make money so i made some money for a speed boat and a row boat and i when out to sea and look on every island and i finely found the island and i help him from the sharks and hungry fish hey was scared.and sad lonely and hungry and thirsty so i gave him water and food let him stay at my house.and feed him every day hay had fun with me and my cat and my dog
and my fish
what would you write a story about?
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